The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
I would like to see you expand the second half of this story a little more—perhaps more description of what Lucy was being called to do and why it had such a stronger appeal to her than all the pleasures and possibilities of staying at home. But having had to make those choices myself, I was with Lucy all the way. Good job. Blessings.
02/23/06
This sounds like chapter one. When will chapter two come out? I would like to see where Lucy was being called. Nicely done and good potential for a short story.
I loved this. I am partial to foreign mission fields. I have never been to one, and probably will never go. But I carry a burden for God to send someone to serve.

Good writing