The Official Writing Challenge
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Without paragraphing, and without double spacing between the paragraphs makes it a daunting task for a potential Reader. Writers write for the sole purpose of being read - so my first suggestion is to make it "Reader Friendly" - separate it into paragraphs, then double space it.

The message is great, however, and so true! Very well written. Keep the above in mind next time you write...and you'll snag more readers with an easy to read entry. Thanks for sharing.
This is a good message, but difficult to read with no spacing. Perhaps a bit too many questions, but overall makes me reconsider "the end."
This is very thoughtful and thought-provoking piece. Please remember to space between paragrahs. This was very difficult to read because it was written so tightly together. I really like the way you took some of the trite "end" sayings and turned them around to make a more positive approach for yourself. Your writing has depth.