The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
This is a very moving piece, with lots of good descriptions. The introduction persuaded me to read on, to find out more about the letter. Well done.
02/21/06
A very moving piece!
02/21/06
Very well written piece. I enjoyed it very much.
02/23/06
A beautiful and well written love story. I liked it very much. I have a couple of suggestions. Break up your paragraphs into shorter ones to make an easier read. I call it "reader friendly", and I was a bit disappointed in the ending...perhaps something with a little more oomph. But that's just one person's opinion. Very well done. Good job! Keep it up!
02/23/06
Beautifully written - heartwrenching, yet heartwarming.
02/23/06
Excellent descriptive writing. I did feel that the ending wasn't as well developed as the rest of the story. I just had this feeling that there should have been more redemption for him in his final release of their love. A very touching entry.
02/24/06
WOW, this was well written and captured my heart. You would do well at romance writing, if you so desired. I could actually feel the man's soul being ripped apart reading the last letter from his true love. Thank you for sharing your talented piece of work. May God continue to bless you with this gift of writing he has given you.