The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/06
A very creative idea and some brilliant phrases got lost in the maze of "who said what to whom"? When you have dialogue among that many different people, you need to break it down into paragraphs, sentences, etc. to make it clear Who Is speaking, etc. However, as I said, it's creative and has great potential with a little work on the paragraphing and verbal aspects. Thanks for sharing.