The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story. We all need a view from God's perspective to put our own in it's rightful place. Nicely done.
I just wanted to tell you that this article reminded me of the several times with my three daughters when they were growing up that I needed distance between them and me to let God straighten me out. I identified so much with Liz. Her 'act of abandonment' was far from that! Every new Christian mom should be told that it is not a disgrace to have to run to a quiet place to regroup with God's help and strength. To do so shows she is not a failure but a better person for it! Good lesson well told!
A daunting task for a Reader to delve into, due to the lack of paragraphing and spacing between paragraphs! Since we Write for the Reader, it is important to be "Reader Friendly" by making it an easy task for them to enjoy the Read. This is meant only as a helpful hint...thanks for sharing your story.
What mother among us hasn't been there (and some fathers,too)! Thanksfor that very realistic slice of life. As said earlier, some paragraphing or at least spaces between lines of spoken parts would really help we readers follow your story. Well crafted story.