The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/06
This is a very important message and you need more than 750 words to deliver it fully. I'd spend more time on this and develop it further. Fill it with illustrations from your own life or the lives of others.

Strongholds (as defined here) can be negative. But they can also be positive. God is our stronghold, our fortress, and that aspect would be a good one to develop as well.

Go for it!