The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
I sure hope Ned gets the message at some point. Well done.
Good writing. Congrats
02/14/06
Poor Ned, with no understanding. This could be a good short story - just a thought.
Nice job. Your story had a nice pace. I liked the ending. Poor, stupid guy!
You have very good writing skills and I really enjoyed this story. I hope your poor silly character Ned will wise up someday!
02/15/06
This was so neat. I have known some folks like that too. Seem like it takes em awhile to get the drift! Good work on the writing. God bless ya, littlelight