The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
I'm no expert on poetry, but personally I think this is wonderful. A beautiful picture of a marvellous truth. Thank you.
I echo the above comment, I know nothing about poetry, but this was great. I loved the anaolgy, the passion and the truth packed into an easy to read poem. I think this one has a shot of placing. Good job!
02/14/06
I really liked this piece. I envy your talent with poetry. It has a natural flow and a wonderful message. Very good
I'm no expert on poetry either, but poetry is my favorite writing. All I see in this poem is beauty of the best kind.
Congratulations, this is truely a Master piece.
02/15/06
I love poetry, and although no expert..I know what I understand, and how easy this one flowed from verse to verse so grand. Wonderful message, bravo! Well done. God bless ya, littlelight
This was an absolute delight to read! The personification captured the scripture with brilliance. Great Job!
02/19/06
As a published Poet myself, I know how difficult it is to keep the rhythm flowing, and yet to keep on track with the message and make sense; and you did it all! A fantastic job! Well done! Can't wait to find out who this great Poet is! Kudos!
Gwynn, this poem is wonderful! You've kept the beautiful flow and imagery consistent throughout your stanzas, making it a sheer delight! Congratulations on your well deserved recognition!!