The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 713 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/13/06
I'm no expert on poetry, but personally I think this is wonderful. A beautiful picture of a marvellous truth. Thank you.
02/14/06
I echo the above comment, I know nothing about poetry, but this was great. I loved the anaolgy, the passion and the truth packed into an easy to read poem. I think this one has a shot of placing. Good job!
02/14/06
I really liked this piece. I envy your talent with poetry. It has a natural flow and a wonderful message. Very good
02/15/06
I'm no expert on poetry either, but poetry is my favorite writing. All I see in this poem is beauty of the best kind.
Congratulations, this is truely a Master piece.
02/15/06
I love poetry, and although no expert..I know what I understand, and how easy this one flowed from verse to verse so grand. Wonderful message, bravo! Well done. God bless ya, littlelight
02/17/06
This was an absolute delight to read! The personification captured the scripture with brilliance. Great Job!
02/19/06
As a published Poet myself, I know how difficult it is to keep the rhythm flowing, and yet to keep on track with the message and make sense; and you did it all! A fantastic job! Well done! Can't wait to find out who this great Poet is! Kudos!
02/21/06
Gwynn, this poem is wonderful! You've kept the beautiful flow and imagery consistent throughout your stanzas, making it a sheer delight! Congratulations on your well deserved recognition!!