The Official Writing Challenge
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Please space your writing. Many people will be turned off when they see it'll be a difficult peice to read. You use beautiful vocabualry and have a very elequent writing gift. I did find tht the topic wasn't used as a central point in this article. Also, in a few parts it was difficult to follow. But, good job and keep writing!
This was very beautiful writing. For readers though is much easier on the eyes if we writers space between paragraphs. I loved the message at the end. Truly reached a wonderful conclusion to your story. God certainly is control throughout our lives. God bless ya, littlelight
Wonderful message. I've done the same: never throw anything away, and then years later, read it again and remember how much God has done. Some work on grammar and punctuation and you've got a winner.