The Official Writing Challenge
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Please space your writing. Many people will be turned off when they see it'll be a difficult peice to read. You use beautiful vocabualry and have a very elequent writing gift. I did find tht the topic wasn't used as a central point in this article. Also, in a few parts it was difficult to follow. But, good job and keep writing!
02/15/06
This was very beautiful writing. For readers though is much easier on the eyes if we writers space between paragraphs. I loved the message at the end. Truly reached a wonderful conclusion to your story. God certainly is control throughout our lives. God bless ya, littlelight
02/17/06
Wonderful message. I've done the same: never throw anything away, and then years later, read it again and remember how much God has done. Some work on grammar and punctuation and you've got a winner.