The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
I liked this story of GRACE. It was cut short and could have been longer I thought. Great story line though, we are so blessed to fall under God's never ending GRACE. You are going places my friend...great work! Thank you.
02/14/06
Nicely written, but seemed to end too abruptly. Engaging and held my attention.
I agree with the previous comments. I felt resolution came too suddenly for this family and escaped reality.This would be a really good story if you developed it a little more. You have a nice writing style, but make sure you get someone to proof read before submitting.
02/15/06
I think your story was so really interesting, and effective that we would like to see more of it. Maybe have more insight. The abrupt ending, well--that to me is just how much it shocked everyone that Jacob suddenly spoke up from the heart. That really works most times. Still--as a interested, curious reader would like to read more of this. God bless ya, littlelight