The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
I liked your content.

A couple observations: I don't believe Your should have been capitalized. There were some short sentences which could have been added to the previous sentence by using a comma. The second paragraph, I would have ended with the word question.

This sounded like a journal entry, which is great for starting to write. I personaly enjoy writing devotionals..food for thought. Keep the faith my friend, and keep writing.
02/13/06
Actually, I think "Yours" is consistent with the capitalization of "You". I could be wrong though :).
That's a beautiful prayer and the prayer of my heart as well. Good job!
Wonderful thoughts, thank you for sharing this beautiful sounding prayer.
Keep up the good work and keep on writing. Remember
that God is always in control of each new morning. Thank you!
02/15/06
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Does read like a daily journal entry, but that is fine too. My prayer and thoughts too. God bless ya, littlelight