The Official Writing Challenge
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this is a good story with the element of truth on its side. I wonder how many of us would have done that much? you know we sometimes ge the feeling it is our responsibility what will be done with our gift. It is not, it our purpose to give. it is between them and God what they do with it.
02/15/05
you stepped out as far as you could go that time...next time you'll step a little further.
02/17/05
As a church secretary I often get calls from people in need and sometimes they are questionalble but God doesn't call us to question only to obey his leading. Good story of putting love to action.
02/20/05
Nicely written. Try to write more with paaragraphs rather than having so many spaces. Just bunch together all of the sentences that are about the same part of the story for each paragraph.
02/23/05
A very touching piece.