The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
I liked this! There was one quick 2nd person slip in the 1st paragraph, but otherwise this is well-written and thoughtful. Consider revisiting this sometime, and writing more as a story, with dialog in addition to the descriptive passages. Might be interesting!
02/07/06
I liked the honesty you showed in your story. Sometimes we want that front to be perfect, but we really know it's a different story on the inside. Reflection like this helps us grow. Appreciate your sharing! God bless ya, littlelight
02/09/06
I enjoyed this story. I particularly liked this sentence.

(I didnít always like climbing them but I had learned to look for the pockets of gold in the climbs.)

Nice job.
02/13/06
I, too, liked the honesty in this piece. We all are always so afraid of letting others see our doubts and hesitancy in our Christian journey that we often miss out on ministering to those who struggle daily with those doubts, thinking they are the only ones. A story like this serves a need that most are incapable of being honest enough to fill. Thank you for writing it.