The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Great message here. Space between paragraphs would make it easier reading. Good work.
02/06/06
Great conclusion! I wonder what this little devotional would be like as a story, with interaction between you and your husband and your toddler. Worth considering? Thanks for this writing!
02/08/06
Nice entry, should space between paragraphs for easier reading. I agree with Jan that this would wonderful with a little dialogue included. Not saying that to be nit-picky..cause taking some advice helps us improve. This is a good message! God bless ya, littlelight