The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice work. Could feel the tension release. With a little editting could be a nice piece for a parents mag. maybe.
I LOVE the idea of God's will blowing gently around us. You could have had it be His love, or His peace, but for some reason the "God's will" thing really spoke to me today.
I really liked this, and the very thoughts of God's will blowing all around me, knowing he is in control of every situation--pretty wonderful thoughts. Good underlying message. Peaceful.
God bless ya, littlelight