The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes--amen! I absolutely agree. Wonderful inspired poem. Everything we go through is only part of that weaving the Lord is doing in our lives tapestry. Can't wait until it's done...Nice work!
God bless ya, littlelight
It takes a strong man or woman to relinquish control of their lives over to God. But, He is faithful to take two steps forward for every one of ours. Well written poem.
I love the tapestry metaphor--if you work on this again, consider taking out the boat and working more tapestry threads in the early part of the poem. This is a lovely prayer, with a unique rhyme and rhythm.
Lovely poem, woven to give God control. Your sentiments are shared by so many, making identification easy, but the way you have expressed them is really unique.
I like the way you use tapestry to weave the poem together. Nicely done.