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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Control (01/30/06)

TITLE: You're Tongue
By karen McLamb
02/01/06


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Sometime people get out of control with there tongue.
We to talk and tease and Gossip
So much in life that we donít know what come out of our mouth anymore

Life and death is in the Power of the tongue
How would you react in this area?
Stop!
Look at yourself in the mirror realize that, God he is in Control
Of our lives not everyone in the world
Keep people out of your private lives,

Keep your focus on Jesus!
He will see you through all things
From season to season
Thatís why we must stay in control.

Of our tongue and how it is use toward talking
Telling people about there selves in any type of way
Saying the wrong words to people
Hearing the wrong thing then going,
Back telling someone else about it.
Childish things that go on in life,
We look to everyone to be prefect in all things,
God said to be prefect we must walk in his likeness
There are prefect people on earth,
That just bow to there savoir
JESUS!
And they control there tongue


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Jan Ackerson 02/08/06
How wonderful it would be if we all followed the advice of this heartfelt poem!

A few edits to consider: You're / Your
there / their
there selves / themselves
Can you run this past a proofreader before you submit?

Not too many people took this approach, so I was glad to read it. Thanks!
Nina Phillips02/09/06
Amen, this is true. Hi, if you would like to PM me, I can go over your writing and be glad to do some proof-reading. I am still a beginner too, still willing to help if I can. Thank you for sharing this unique post and poem. God bless ya, littlelight
Phyllis Inniss 02/10/06
I agree we need to control our tongue. People say things that hurt and they don't care, but James 3 verse warns that "the tongue is a fire - an unrighteous world among our members." Thanks for sharing.