The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
You tied your story together very well - from swing to swing. Nicely done. Blessings.
02/07/06
I enjoyed reading your story from title to end, everything flowed through very nicely. I would watch the - though. That is habit forming. LOL Very well done, and I'm sure many of us could relate to your story. God bless ya, littlelight
02/08/06
I enjoyed reading your article. From joy of Melissa's childhood to her dismissive attitude of you in her teen years, you have painted a lovely scrapbook of a mother's love. Releasing control to God in the end was the perfect answer.
02/08/06
Oh, just beautiful! I love your last line.
02/09/06
Such a lovely piece. I have 2 daughters, the oldest 9, and knowing that this day will come breaks my heart already. Thank the Lord we have Him to guide us, and our teenagers, through this trying time. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style and you finished it so well.
02/10/06
I can't believe I'm in the Beginners Category - this was so well written! Tears stung my eyes as I've been there/done that also. Thanks for sharing! Great Write...and an entertaining Read from start to finish!