The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
This needs some work on grammar, punctuation, etc., but it has a good story to it.
02/07/06
I agree, needs some work on punctuation. All in all a good reminder, and good story. God bless ya, littlelight
I liked your insight. That moment when you come face to face with yourself in extreme conditions. That's when valuable lessons are learned.
02/08/06
I'd like to see this expanded--start with their argument, perhaps, so that we get to know these characters better. Lovely ending.
02/11/06
A little editing wouldn't hurt, especially with the punctuation and un-necessary words - but otherwise a very nice story! Good job, and thanks for sharing.