The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Cute. The expert's touch makes all the difference. Blessings.
02/07/06
That was cute and realistic way of teaching us. Nice work on the writing, enjoyable reading. God bless ya, littlelight
02/08/06
A very cute story, with a great kicker. Work with someone who will deomnstrate punctutation of dialog for you--that would really make this piece shine.
02/11/06
Nice story, but could use some separation of paragraphs and dialogue to make it more Reader Friendly. Thanks for sharing. Keep at it! God Bless.