The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Very good reminders!! Nice job!
I found quite a few spelling and grammer errors. Those mistakes made it difficult to read. I liked your creativity and your message was very true. Next time have someone read it over before submitting it.
02/06/06
I was just a little confused at first reading through, wondering who was speaking to whom. When I reached the end, I found it didn't really matter because of question. This is really a good thought you had, and I think if had a little more clarity with the charactors it would have been right nice! God bless ya, littlelight
Thanks for the reminder...we do often take our own way, and its often revealed in the little things we say. Good for thought. I enjoyed this!
02/08/06
Creative and different: I like it.
02/12/06
Loved your message....made me realize how critical our words are when we try to control our lives and how encouraging they become when we give God control. Great job!