The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
Nice. It would be great if this was broken into paragraphs, and you gave us more of a visual of those lovely acres and the souls to be harvested :)
Good story. Some paragraphs would have helped, also perhaps some insight on who was speaking.
02/05/06
I thought this was a very good story. Spacing between paragraphs makes it more readable for us. I enjoyed reading about the faith of this pastor, concering the future of the pasture. Very nice! God bless ya, littlelight