The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
This was really cute. You started it nicely and then moved nicely into conversation with a cute ending.
01/31/06
Very well presented and thought out. I enjoyed reading this.
02/01/06
"Neat"! "Cool"! to adopt a couple of teenage words! Yes, it was entertaining! Great read! (Sorry, my teen vocabulary is rusty), but Keen! I enjoyed it! Thanks.
02/01/06
Makes me think of how sin creeps into our lives - slowly taking up our personal space. A good reminder to keep Christ in the center of everything and our space will be filled with Him. Nicely written.
02/05/06
So light, and enjoyable. I picked up the story to read interesting title. The end come full circle, and quite a learning experience. God bless ya, littlelight