The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
Very vivid writing though you might want to watch so many adjectives and instead show more by action or words. It would be a great to maybe add more to this.
02/01/06
Absolutely awesome! A magnificent view of sky, sea, dunes, dog and stars! An artistic painting with words! Great Job! Well written! I loved it!