The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
Ohhhhh, I like this poem. Smooth, nice rhythem. I felt like I was right there in the early morning waiting for the sun to come up, with those very same thoughts. How touching. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
02/01/06
Although this is not traditional rhyme - it is still a beautiful picture of God's created beauty in the form of poetic prose or free style. I loved it! Thank you!
Very nice poem of beginnings and newness of life. The creation story though old is ever new indeed!