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01/31/06
This is a lovely, touching story. There are several shifts from present tense to past tense which should be edited. We should all be more like this loving woman!
02/01/06
Such a lovely story about a "helping hand" - and space in her heart for another human being! It touches my heart when I read of those who reach out to the unloved, the homeless and the lost! I've already walked in the shoes of the unloved and lost - but I wish I could say I've walked in the shoes of a person like Molly. This story has nudged me to act upon my "wishes". Thank you.
02/02/06
A nicely written story -and a good lesson (and a big leap of faith for the young lady!)
02/03/06
Touching tale...the tense changes are a bit confusing. The ending felt a little forced, but I enjoyed your illustration of the lady's intimate thoughts. Good effort!