The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/06
Good concept idea growing there. Lots of places to go with this too. Maybe a series of adventures.
02/02/06
I liked this! You have a talent for creativity. Your characters were real and you made me want more. You took on a concept that could be real in years to come.
02/03/06
A very nice start! I'm a life-long scifi fan and enjoyed this :) Some intriguing ideas to explore :)
02/04/06
This is a great beginning of more! Great dialogue and scense of scenery. We were right there! Good job of Sci-fi!