The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
This is an awesome stroy. I can't believe that no one has commented on it yet. It was short, sweet and left a powerful ending. Good writing!
01/31/06
ditto. This was very well done and a totally unexpected ending to boot.
02/01/06
Excellent. Especially intense for us moms who find ourselves more irritated than we would like somedays. A reminder that I treasure my family.
02/01/06
Well written, with a fitting title.
The ending was dramatic.
02/01/06
Very good reminder. As someone who gets bogged down with kids and husbands and chores each morning before breakfast even hits, this really hit home. I know I wouldn't trade them for the world, but in the day to day, sometimes it's hard to focus on the positive.

Thanks for this!
02/01/06
Puts 'wishing' into check. Be careful of what you wish for. It might just backfire!
02/05/06
That was some kind of nightmare wish come true! Or a bad daydream. YIKES! Makes ya think doesn't it?
Short, different and what a whammer at the end. God bless ya, littlelight