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01/30/06
Very touching--especially towards the end, when she walks "across the Grand Canyon." Simply beautifully written.
I really enjoyed this peice. It was very well written and any married person can realte in some way to your story. Thanks for sharing. Great job!
01/31/06
Lovely job! I loved the "walked across the Grand Canyon" too - super image. One little slip: "how could I have (I) forgotten" but that is meaningless in the midst of something so well done. Congratulations.
02/02/06
Oh, this was great! I know many married couples could easily relate. The love is still there, just how to stoke it. Ending is marvelous, walking across the grand canyon ties in with the beginning and carries through to the end. Great piece! God bless ya, littlelight
02/06/06
Very moving and could be used to remind couples of their commitment to Jesus and each other.
02/06/06
Congratulations! Well written piece! I like the imagery of the Grand Canyon as well.
02/06/06
This is a very lovely piece. It shows great emotions, with wonderful love and sentiment.
Great job and a wonderful share. God bless.