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01/30/06
It will be better! amen. This is very emotional and shows some real turmoil. I think of the scriptures that give us hope in these situations, "It's better to cut off something physical like a hand or foot that we have held on to, that is bad for us, than to let it drive us to (insane)hell." We let go of physical things bad for us, and the Lord replace and fills the empty space with much better, richer spiritual parts. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. So true. God bless ya, littlelight
01/30/06
What a marverlous literary device--the personification of an eating disorder! Well done!
01/31/06
Well done. What an extraordinary surprise at the end when we find out you are writing about an eating disorder. Very clever, well crafted piece. Thanks for submitting this one. I think it speaks volumes.
Well said, very emotive. Jesus is more than enough!
Excellent honest and very strong indeed. God bless.
I suspected that it wasn't a M-A-N you were talking about, but was surprised that 'he' turned out to be an eating disorder - an interesting and effective device that drew the reader in. Loved the last line - your character is finding the right answers at last. Well done.