The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
This is really cute! Sounds like home sweet homey. I think though that you could use some editing, persons speaking should be within quotes " ". And separated helps keep the writing from getting confused, and the reader too. Just a helpful hint. God bless ya, littlelight
02/05/06
Cute start. Lots of opportunity here. Thanks for posting.