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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Space (01/23/06)

TITLE: Where Is my Space
By karen McLamb
01/23/06


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MOM! OH MOM!
Where is my space? Your space is on the left side of the closet.
Please put your box upright in that area.
MOM!
Yes DEAR! This box is really heavy! Okay!
Just leave it and our will get to it later. Okay! MOM!
Anything else to do before I can go outside, YES!
Please wash the dishes and make space in the cabinet for the new pots.
OH! Were getting new pots and pans, Yes we are!
I will wash the dishes now. Swish, Splash suds, splash.
What a bath! With washing these dishes
Now to make space on the left and a little on the right
MOM! YES!
Come and see if this is correct, oh! No! I need it just a little larger OKAY!
Just a little larger, just a little taller
NOW thatís the way honey!
Thatís it MOM! YES! Prefect! You have done a great job.


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Nina Phillips01/30/06
This is really cute! Sounds like home sweet homey. I think though that you could use some editing, persons speaking should be within quotes " ". And separated helps keep the writing from getting confused, and the reader too. Just a helpful hint. God bless ya, littlelight
dub W02/05/06
Cute start. Lots of opportunity here. Thanks for posting.