The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
Amen. Nice thoughts, interesting to read, and so true. Thank you for sharing! God bless, littlelight
01/30/06
Very good conclusion. If you ever come back to this piece, consider re-writing "he" and "man" to words like "we" and "people." That way you include all of your readership. I like your 3rd paragraph especially.