The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
I join in too with a big loud AMEN.How just like God to make Devine appointments for us, we are blessed!
01/24/06
NOW we know why the angel didn't step in sooner, right? So many things we don't know the answers to - but one day we'll know all the "Why's"...nice story...and well written.
01/24/06
The section with the demon and the angel is exceptionally well-written. The only thing I question is the job offer; most churches hesitate to hire a person without knowing their faith status. The "coincidence" of avoiding the accident is perhaps enough? You also wrote the main character's internal voice very well--thanks for this story!
01/26/06
I like the description of the angel and demon--you never know how many things like that happen on a day to day basis.

There did seem to be a lot going on especially near the end but the story was very interesting. Nice perspective on the influence of angels and demons!
Larry, time to move up a level (or two!). I've sen your name across quite a few wins in the past few weeks. Great job! But time to move up!