The Official Writing Challenge
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I join in too with a big loud AMEN.How just like God to make Devine appointments for us, we are blessed!
NOW we know why the angel didn't step in sooner, right? So many things we don't know the answers to - but one day we'll know all the "Why's"...nice story...and well written.
The section with the demon and the angel is exceptionally well-written. The only thing I question is the job offer; most churches hesitate to hire a person without knowing their faith status. The "coincidence" of avoiding the accident is perhaps enough? You also wrote the main character's internal voice very well--thanks for this story!
I like the description of the angel and demon--you never know how many things like that happen on a day to day basis.

There did seem to be a lot going on especially near the end but the story was very interesting. Nice perspective on the influence of angels and demons!
Larry, time to move up a level (or two!). I've sen your name across quite a few wins in the past few weeks. Great job! But time to move up!