The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
First of all, you need to make your story more "Reader friendly" by making it into paragraphs with double spaces between them. Make it easy for the Reader, who, after all is the person Writers are trying to entice to their pages in order to read their messages, their opinions and their entertaining stories.
This particular story went over my head - but you have a potential to write bigger and greater things; keep at it and God BLess.
01/24/06
Hmmmm, I'm going to have to think on this one for a while. If it's an allegory, I'm not entirely clear on its deeper meaning. But as a story about a poor little flea-infested dog, it's certainly well-written, and it was fun to discover who the "invaders" were.