The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
Very charming!
01/26/06
Nice writing! Nice starting paragraph and geat tie up conclusion! I did notice I think you meant 'slipped' not 'clipped'. I felt for your character but especially loved the 'take away' from it. thanks!
01/30/06
Rachel - Congrats!

This one was my favorite of the week - yep, I read all of them.

I also notice you've entered the challenge twice and won a Highly Commended both times!