The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way you tied the past into a possible future. At first I didn't notice your dates and thought you were referring to the Jewish holocost. Then, I recognized where you were going. Sounds like the basis for a short story or maybe a book.
01/24/06
There is great irony in the contrast of what is "hope" for What-Might-Have-Been and "hope" for Sharon. Beautifully written.
Wow. This was a great read. I can see you taking this story further if you wanted to. Very creative.
01/26/06
A lot of thought went into this. I loved the style. We need reminders like this to speak out as Christians!
01/27/06
Very emotive read! My only criticism, she isn't allowed to take the diary but she has it in the prison. Might need explaining if you expand this. Nevertheless, well done and keep the challenge articles coming. Yeggy
01/28/06
This is the type of piece that reminds me that the time of the Lord's return must be close at hand. I wonder how many of us are ready for that time? Am I?
Very good! Thank you for sharing!