The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
I love the line "All voids will vanish / In His smile". Good job! If you hit "preview" before you submit, you'll see where the formatting has done funny things with your spacing and punctuation. And the line "There's a chasm in front of me / That will grant me passage" is unclear. This poem is full of hope and enthusiasm--good job!