The Official Writing Challenge
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Very gripping
Excellent, very evocative.
Well-written and powerful! The word "he" in the first sentence begs to be a noun, as otherwise the reader's eyes try to associate it with the given noun, "mother." That's a minor quibble, however--this is a wonderful story of redemption.
I liked this! Her stress and anxiety was vivid. The ending was clear and tied it all together. :)
A powerful entry - a sad story that happens all too often. Glad to see a hopeful ending.
Well written. Good description of her inner struggle. I also appreciated the ending - hope in God's promise of being a new creation. Here's to ALL things new... Thanks.
Very nice writing! I agree, that first 'he' threw me, till I reread it a couple of times. Good job!
I love this piece! Very very well written! Thanks so much for sharing this.

Our best writing is when we pull from the depth of our emotions.
Yes! Very good writing! Carried my emotions all the way! Great job!