The Official Writing Challenge
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This needed a little more spacing between paragraphs. Maybe a little more insight as it took me awhile to understand what the friend was telling her. BUT the heart of the story is about faith, living the life and knowing God will take care of you. that came out loud and clear1
02/17/05
Nie beginning. I felt you had to squish the ending to make it within the 750 words, but apparantly Scripture verses at the end are left out of the word count if you go over.
02/17/05
Susan's faith was strong enough and her benefactors' hospitality was well borne out by the scripture at the end.