The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your story. Obvioualy out of your own experience.
01/23/06
Oh, how I can relate to this story! Good job! There are a few missing words here and there; a more careful editing would catch those and make this piece nearly perfect.
Whilst some polishing an editing is needed, this was a lovely piece and I enjoyed it very much. I remember my own dreadful stage fright, and this captured those feelings so well. Some good advice has been offered already; keep writing and God bless.