The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
A heartfelt prayer, and a good way to start the day. Watch for common spelling errors: roll / role and to / too. A few edits for punctuation, and this will be a tidy dialog. Thanks for sharing so freely.
01/27/06
A chaotic household - I can completely relate. Nicely done, but watch spelling and punctuation closely. Using 'firstly' usually asks for second, third, etc., and is usually 'first.'
01/27/06
The world would be so much easier to handle if it weren't for the people in it, but … thank the Lord that He is sufficient in helping us face a "peopled" world. You could have left out the "Lord's reply" in those couple of paragraphs. We would have known who was speaking and it would have made your prayer more of a dialogue with God. You're doing well.