The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Amazing story. I would have liked to see a little more introduction in the beginning to establish the reason for the food bank and what was going on in the community to render such a response. But it was still a great demonstration of seeing God's hand in the mist. There was a similar circumstance that happened at my church (but on a much smaller scale). It was great to read about another one's experience.
02/14/05
This starts out with a lot of energy. Good job! It gets a little bogged down in the 4th paragraph. Best wishes with your story.
you got the details down pat but I would have loved to see this through more of a narrative, I wanted to know these people who were working so hard! What a wonderful blessing that day must have been!
02/15/05
God is great and greatly to be praised. Thanks for sharing.
02/16/05
love events like this...everyone works hard, laughs and God is gloried