The Official Writing Challenge
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I definitely did not expect the conclusion! Very unique and powerful telling of an entry into heaven!
Wonderful story, and beautifully written! Keep up the good work!
I loved this story, and what a celebration we shall all have one day. We must remian faithful and continue on our journey spreading the gospel.

Keep writing, this was beautiful!
Congrats on your win! Very nicely done! Great ending!
Congratulations and Wow! I was quite surprised by the ending by him being a spiritual soldier. The beginning to me was a bit chopped, but it quickly got interesting and ended great!
Congratulations on your First Place Win. Now that I have read your story I can understand why. The Judges have done a good job...and You? You have made the name "Writer" something we can be proud of! Kudos!
Congratulations. I loved this entry. You managed to take a predictable topic and make it fresh. The twist in the end really made the piece. Well done!
Very good. Hats off to you for the win. God bless!!
Ditto. What they said. The twist at the end made it totally worth the read.
It's a good story and should be shared.
Get it out there, Larry.
This was really beautifully written. From the beginning to the awesome surprise, and celebrated ending. Congrats on your win! richly deserved!
God bless ya, littlelight