The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/06
I definitely did not expect the conclusion! Very unique and powerful telling of an entry into heaven!
Wonderful story, and beautifully written! Keep up the good work!
01/20/06
I loved this story, and what a celebration we shall all have one day. We must remian faithful and continue on our journey spreading the gospel.

Keep writing, this was beautiful!
01/23/06
Congrats on your win! Very nicely done! Great ending!
01/23/06
Congratulations and Wow! I was quite surprised by the ending by him being a spiritual soldier. The beginning to me was a bit chopped, but it quickly got interesting and ended great!
01/23/06
Congratulations on your First Place Win. Now that I have read your story I can understand why. The Judges have done a good job...and You? You have made the name "Writer" something we can be proud of! Kudos!
Congratulations. I loved this entry. You managed to take a predictable topic and make it fresh. The twist in the end really made the piece. Well done!
01/23/06
Very good. Hats off to you for the win. God bless!!
01/23/06
Ditto. What they said. The twist at the end made it totally worth the read.
It's a good story and should be shared.
Get it out there, Larry.
01/23/06
This was really beautifully written. From the beginning to the awesome surprise, and celebrated ending. Congrats on your win! richly deserved!
God bless ya, littlelight