The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the style this was written in as it gave the reader quick cold looks into a life, his thoughts.

I liked the way this story wasn't sugar coated, but stark in what life was like for him.

Yet, here at the end we find the tender spot that never hardened in him and we suddenly see a new person and find we like him very much. Good read
09/24/06
Still reading these remarkable exerpts from a Man's Life and Times...great writer! Great human being with a very witty and brilliant mind. All spells Talent with a capital "T".
09/29/06
This is so powerful, and you did such a great job setting up the reader for the ending. I think this story deserves to go places.