The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful story, and beautifully written!
01/17/06
Very tender and sweet. Well done!
01/19/06
I nice love story -well done.
01/19/06
Very nice! You have talent for expressing thoughts and feelings in a character.
01/20/06
A sweet story. I so want to know how he escaped and returned home. You portrayed her love really well. yeggy
01/20/06
Beautifully done and well told. A joy to read. Beautiful.
01/21/06
Ahhhh... a budding Romance novelist here! Excellent style and storyline. Very nice pacing. And the characters were right on. You may just find yourself placing again! ;-)
01/23/06
Very wonderful and sweet!
I love period romance, and I love this entry. Believable characters, strong description without being flowery. Congratulations!
01/23/06
Wonderful romantic beginning of a novel. Also of deep faith, and trusting in the Lord against the odds. Enjoyed reading your story..Congrats on your win! Hope to hear more..God bless ya, littlelight