The Official Writing Challenge
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This piece demonstrated how hospitality is sometimes a labor of love. I felt the servant's heart through this piece. I wasn't sure about the format on this piece because it looks like a poem yet it reads like a short story. There were
a few grammatical errors (commas, etc). Other than that, it could be a great piece for a family magazine.
02/14/05
I agree, this could be great once it's cleaned up.
You captured the spirit of a house filled with love.
02/14/05
So true. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Loved this piece as a mum watching the nest gradually empty, and wondering what comes next. Thank you
02/15/05
what a welcomed home you have...many people could have that relationship with their family when the need came.