The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/06
I like the flow of this poem, like a crescendo at the middle, then winding down at then end, a perfect match with the words.

"A lot" is two words, not "alot," and "renewed" instead of "re-newed."

Lovely rhyme scheme and heartfelt emotion.
01/17/06
I enjoyed reading this one. It has a wonderful flow, expressive descriptions, good rhythem. Agree with Jan, a little work on a few spelling errs but an easy rememdy. This is a really well thought out poem and blessing. God bless ya, littlelight