The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful picture of heaven, and a wonderful scripture to use. Thanks for sharing.
01/16/06
A wonderful word-picture, and a perfect rhyme scheme. You might consider working on more consistency of rhythm, and the word "WOW" seemed out of place in this poem. Nevertheless, I can't wait to see you there!
This is a beautiful theme. You might want to tweek it a bit. Here and there there's a bit of inconsistency in the flow. Nevertheless, you write well. Stay tuned to His Word and you'll see, He'll finetune your output. Praise God!