The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing.
01/16/06
How lovely that the little girl was named Blessing! This is a very tender and sweet story.

There are several punctuation problems throughout the story; with those cleaned up, the story with have a better look and "flow."

You've touched my heart through this little girl.
01/17/06
This is a lovely story! It needs a few changes here and there and it will be even better. I loved your descriptions...good writing.:)