The Official Writing Challenge
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What an interesting read. The idea that a person could fly under the influence of the Holy Spirit is a new one to me. You had some spelling mistakes. Perhaps you could give Grammarly a go? It's free and does a fabulous job of finding hiccups.
I enjoyed the relationship between the MC and her grandmother. Well done!
Great job with the topic!
What a wonderful creative way to show a awesome relationship with the Holy Spirit. Great job!

The technical part of the writing needed a lot of work, and it is a shame we have to address that part when the creativity was exhilarating.

Break up your paragraphs. Watch for misspellings.

I loved how you created a wonderful relationship we all wish we had with the Holy Spirit. God bless and work on those tiresome technical parts of writing. It is my greatest problem in writing.